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人物介绍式书面表达涉及多种体裁,本文分别介绍其写作注意点。
一、专门人物介绍文写作注意点
请先看下面一篇书面表达实例:
刘翔是我国著名运动员,阅读下表内容写一篇介绍性短文。
参考词汇:110米栏 110m hurdles;劳伦斯 Laureus字数:120左右
范文:
As we all know, Liu Xiang is a famous player in our country. He was born in Shanghai, China on July 13, 1983. In his childhood, he loved sports very much and was good at running and jumping. However, because of his general height, his parents once advised him to give up practising. Luckily, he stuck to his sports dream.
He trains hard and always believes in himself. In recent years, he has won great honour for our country. In 2003, he won a bronze at the world indoor track and field championships. In 2004, at the Athens Olympic Games, he won a gold medal. In 2005, he was awarded Laureus World Newcomer. In 2006, he broke the world record of 110m hurdles. On August 18, 2008, Liu Xiang dropped out of the competition of the 110m hurdles of the 2008 Olympic Games because of the injuries in his leg. However, Liu Xiang didn’t give up his sports dream.
Such is Liu Xiang, a diligent and confident player. We have every reason to believe he will win more gold medals for our country.
专门人物介绍文往往要求从人物成长足迹、个性品质、个人简历和发展前景等角度介绍人物的背景信息,因此写作时应以时间推移为线索交待文意,这样可以使文章脉络清晰,层次分明。范文根据写作要求从成长足迹、个性品质、个人简历和发展前景等角度表达文意,条理清楚,层次清晰,整体感较强。
正确使用时态也非常重要。介绍人物足迹时应用一般过去时表达文意,因为所介绍内容都是过去发生的事。人物个性品质是人物一直具有的特点,因此介绍时应用一般现在时表达文意。个人简历是人物已经经历过的事情,当然应用一般过去时表达文意。人物发展前景为人物未来发展状况的预测,应用一般将来时进行介绍。范文用一般过去时介绍刘翔成长足迹,用一般现在时介绍刘翔个性品质,用一般过去时介绍刘翔个人简历,用一般将来时介绍刘翔发展前景,符合专门人物介绍文的时态特点。
专门人物介绍文的语言有很强的规律性。开头简要介绍人物可使用概括性语言…is a famous…;人物介绍结束后可使用总结性语言Such is…, a…and…player/writer;介绍人物出生可用…was born in;介绍人物年龄可使用…years old, at the age of…, when…was+数词;介绍人物获金牌可使用win a gold medal, win the first place;介绍人物为祖国获得荣誉可用win great honour for his/her country。范文中的Liu Xiang is a famous player in our country. He was born in…. In recent years, he has won great honour for our country. Such is Liu Xiang, a diligent and confident player. We have every reason to believe he can win more gold medals for our country.等句型为人物介绍文的规律性用语,有很广阔的使用空间。
写专门人物介绍文时还应用好过渡性词汇。介绍人物成长足迹时应着重用好表示时间的过渡性词汇,如first/at first/in the beginning, then, at last/finally/in the end;介绍人物众多业绩可用besides, what’s more, at the same time, in the meanwhile等过渡性词汇;介绍人物努力工作后获取成功可用as a result, as a result of, therefore, so, thanks to等过渡性词汇。范文贴切使用As we all know, However, Luckily等过渡性词汇,增加了文章的连贯性和逻辑性。
二、记叙型人物介绍文写作注意点
请先看下面一篇书面表达实例:
下面五幅图描述了一位解放军战士冒着生命危险抢救落水小孩的故事。请根据这些图画用英语写一篇故事。
字数:120左右。
范文:
One day a young PLA man was walking along a path. Suddenly he heard someone crying “Help! Help!” He quickly ran to see what was happening. On his arrival there, he saw three boys struggling in the river and they were in great danger. He jumped into the river without any hesitation and soon pulled two boys onto the bank. Just at that time, the third boy was washed away. The soldier jumped into the river again in spite of great danger. He managed to catch the boy and pulled him back. Finally, thanks to his timely help, the three boys were saved. He was very happy and was cheered as a hero.
记叙型人物介绍文通常以图画为材料给定形式,要求考生按图画所给顺序介绍人物的一次特定经历。
因记叙型人物介绍文介绍特定人物一次有意义的经历,因此应以时间推移为线索介绍故事的发生、发展、高潮和结局,这样文章就会显得层次清晰,脉络分明。范文以时间为线索介绍故事的发生、发展、高潮和结局,文章结构合理,条理清楚,层次分明。
因记叙型人物介绍文介绍在特定人物身上已经发生的事情,因此应以一般过去时为主表达文意,不能随心所欲地使用时态,造成不必要的失分。范文以一般过去时为主表达文意,符合记叙型人物介绍文的时态特点。
因记叙型人物介绍文以时间发生的先后为顺序交待文意,因此写作时应用好表示时间的过渡性词汇,如one day/morning/afternoon/evening/night, suddenly, first, then, just at that time, finally/at last/in the end。强调人物经过努力达到的良好结果可用thanks to, as a result, as a result of等过渡性词汇。范文用One day, Suddenly, Just at that time, Finally等表示时间的过渡性词汇,使文章语句更通顺,行文更连贯,逻辑更严密。
三、求职信中的人物介绍文写作注意点
请先看下面一篇书面表达实例:
假如你叫李芳,最近从报纸上了解到某公司欲招聘若干名翻译,你对这一工作颇感兴趣,请根据下表提供的信息,给公司经理写一封求职信。
范文:
Dear Manager,
I have learned from the newspaper that your company wants to hire a few people to be English interpreters. I’m interested in this position very much, and want to apply for it. I think I have a few advantages. Now, I’d like to introduce something about myself to you. I’m Li Fang, a 28-year-old woman. I’m in good health and I’m tall, slim and beautiful. Besides, I’m kind and polite to others and can get along well with others. Also, I’m good at expressing myself and I like to make friends with others. I graduated from the English department of Shandong University in 1999 and then I worked as an English teacher in a middle school for eight years. As a result, I have much work experience. If I’m accepted, I’ll work harder to make much progress. If you agree with me, please phone me. My telephone number is 0531-87654328.
Yours truly,
Li Fang
求职信中的人物介绍主要涉及人物外貌形象、健康状况、业余爱好、优秀品质和个人简历,常有下列规律性语言:介绍人物外貌可用…is tall, slim and beautiful. …is tall and strong. 介绍人物健康状况可用…is healthy/in good health. 介绍人物业余爱好可用…likes/is fond of/enjoys…in his/her spare/free time. …has many hobbies, such as…, …and…. 介绍人物热爱工作时可用…loves his/her work very much and works very hard.介绍人物经验丰富可用…has much work experience.介绍人物与人融洽相处可用…is kind/friendly to others. …likes to make friends with others. …can get along/on well with others.…is ready/willing to help others.介绍人物严于律己可用…is strict with himself/herself. …is strict in his/her work. 介绍人物获奖状况可用…is often elected a model…. …has been elected a model…many times.介绍人物受尊敬情况可用…is deeply respected and loved by others. …all respect and love…. 介绍人物变换工作地点可使用go to, come to, move to。范文使用I’m tall, slim and beautiful. I’m kind and polite to others and can get along well with others. I like to make friends with others. I have much work experience.等求职信人物介绍的规律性语言,提高了语言的规范度。
当然也必须注意求职信中人物介绍性内容的时态。人物外貌形象、健康状况、业余爱好、优秀品质属人物现在具有的特点,因此应以一般现在时为主表达文意。人物个人简历属在人物身上已经发生的事,因此应以一般过去时为主表达文意。范文用一般现在时介绍人物外貌形象、健康状况、业余爱好和优秀品质,用一般过去时介绍人物简历,符合求职信人物介绍时态特点。
写求职信介绍人物背景信息时还应贴切使用过渡性词汇。介绍人物的不同优秀品质可用besides, what’s more, at the same time, in the meanwhile, also, too等表示并列关系的过 渡性词汇。介绍人物简历时的过渡性词汇与专门人物介绍文中个人简历过渡性词汇相似。
范文使用Besides, Also, As a result等过渡性词汇,增加了语句间的连贯性和人物的可信度。
四、交友信中的人物介绍文写作注意点
请先看下面一篇书面表达实例:
假如你叫王晨,是北京一中高三学生,国际友谊俱乐部根据你的要求,把澳大利亚朋友贝蒂介绍给你为笔友。现在请你写一封信给贝蒂,表达愿意与其交友的愿望,并提供自己的有关信息(如下表所示),询问对方学习、生活和家庭情况。
字数:120左右。
范文:
Dear Betty,
I’m very glad to have a chance to be your pen pal. You were introduced to me by International Friendship Club because I wanted to have a pen friend in your country. I hope we’ll be good friends forever.
My name is Wang Chen and I am eighteen years old. I’m a senior grade 3 student of Beijing No. 1 Middle School. In our school, all the students study hard but are very happy. In my spare time, I like playing football, swimming, listening to music and singing songs. I’m optimistic and easy-going. I have a happy family and there are four people in it. They are my father, my mother, my younger sister and I. My father is an engineer; my mother is a teacher and my younger sister is also a student. We live in a small but beautiful town in Beijing with clean rivers and green mountains.
Dear Betty, can you tell me something about your study, life and family? I’m really very interested in it.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours truly,
Wang Chen
交友信中的人物介绍主要涉及姓名、性别、性格、业余爱好等人物现在具有的背景信息,因此应用一般现在时表达文意。有时交友信还简要介绍特定人物家庭成员现在具有的背景信息,因此也应用一般现在时表达文意。范文用一般现在时表达文意,符合交友信人物介绍文的时态特点。
写交友信对人物进行介绍时可用下列规律性语言:介绍人物姓名、年龄和职业可用My name is…and I’m…years old. I’m a/an…. 介绍人物家庭成员可用I have a happy family and there are…people in it. They are… and I. My…is a/an…and my…is a/an…. My…is also a…. 介绍人物业余爱好时可使用In my spare time I like…. I have many hobbies, such as…, …and….范文中出现的My name is Wang Chen and I am eighteen years old. In my spare time, I like….I have a happy family and there are four people in it. They are my father, my mother, my younger sister and I. My father is an engineer; my mother is a teacher and my younger sister is also a student. 是交友信中人物介绍文的规律性语言,有较为宽广的使用空间。
一、专门人物介绍文写作注意点
请先看下面一篇书面表达实例:
刘翔是我国著名运动员,阅读下表内容写一篇介绍性短文。
参考词汇:110米栏 110m hurdles;劳伦斯 Laureus字数:120左右
范文:
As we all know, Liu Xiang is a famous player in our country. He was born in Shanghai, China on July 13, 1983. In his childhood, he loved sports very much and was good at running and jumping. However, because of his general height, his parents once advised him to give up practising. Luckily, he stuck to his sports dream.
He trains hard and always believes in himself. In recent years, he has won great honour for our country. In 2003, he won a bronze at the world indoor track and field championships. In 2004, at the Athens Olympic Games, he won a gold medal. In 2005, he was awarded Laureus World Newcomer. In 2006, he broke the world record of 110m hurdles. On August 18, 2008, Liu Xiang dropped out of the competition of the 110m hurdles of the 2008 Olympic Games because of the injuries in his leg. However, Liu Xiang didn’t give up his sports dream.
Such is Liu Xiang, a diligent and confident player. We have every reason to believe he will win more gold medals for our country.
专门人物介绍文往往要求从人物成长足迹、个性品质、个人简历和发展前景等角度介绍人物的背景信息,因此写作时应以时间推移为线索交待文意,这样可以使文章脉络清晰,层次分明。范文根据写作要求从成长足迹、个性品质、个人简历和发展前景等角度表达文意,条理清楚,层次清晰,整体感较强。
正确使用时态也非常重要。介绍人物足迹时应用一般过去时表达文意,因为所介绍内容都是过去发生的事。人物个性品质是人物一直具有的特点,因此介绍时应用一般现在时表达文意。个人简历是人物已经经历过的事情,当然应用一般过去时表达文意。人物发展前景为人物未来发展状况的预测,应用一般将来时进行介绍。范文用一般过去时介绍刘翔成长足迹,用一般现在时介绍刘翔个性品质,用一般过去时介绍刘翔个人简历,用一般将来时介绍刘翔发展前景,符合专门人物介绍文的时态特点。
专门人物介绍文的语言有很强的规律性。开头简要介绍人物可使用概括性语言…is a famous…;人物介绍结束后可使用总结性语言Such is…, a…and…player/writer;介绍人物出生可用…was born in;介绍人物年龄可使用…years old, at the age of…, when…was+数词;介绍人物获金牌可使用win a gold medal, win the first place;介绍人物为祖国获得荣誉可用win great honour for his/her country。范文中的Liu Xiang is a famous player in our country. He was born in…. In recent years, he has won great honour for our country. Such is Liu Xiang, a diligent and confident player. We have every reason to believe he can win more gold medals for our country.等句型为人物介绍文的规律性用语,有很广阔的使用空间。
写专门人物介绍文时还应用好过渡性词汇。介绍人物成长足迹时应着重用好表示时间的过渡性词汇,如first/at first/in the beginning, then, at last/finally/in the end;介绍人物众多业绩可用besides, what’s more, at the same time, in the meanwhile等过渡性词汇;介绍人物努力工作后获取成功可用as a result, as a result of, therefore, so, thanks to等过渡性词汇。范文贴切使用As we all know, However, Luckily等过渡性词汇,增加了文章的连贯性和逻辑性。
二、记叙型人物介绍文写作注意点
请先看下面一篇书面表达实例:
下面五幅图描述了一位解放军战士冒着生命危险抢救落水小孩的故事。请根据这些图画用英语写一篇故事。
字数:120左右。
范文:
One day a young PLA man was walking along a path. Suddenly he heard someone crying “Help! Help!” He quickly ran to see what was happening. On his arrival there, he saw three boys struggling in the river and they were in great danger. He jumped into the river without any hesitation and soon pulled two boys onto the bank. Just at that time, the third boy was washed away. The soldier jumped into the river again in spite of great danger. He managed to catch the boy and pulled him back. Finally, thanks to his timely help, the three boys were saved. He was very happy and was cheered as a hero.
记叙型人物介绍文通常以图画为材料给定形式,要求考生按图画所给顺序介绍人物的一次特定经历。
因记叙型人物介绍文介绍特定人物一次有意义的经历,因此应以时间推移为线索介绍故事的发生、发展、高潮和结局,这样文章就会显得层次清晰,脉络分明。范文以时间为线索介绍故事的发生、发展、高潮和结局,文章结构合理,条理清楚,层次分明。
因记叙型人物介绍文介绍在特定人物身上已经发生的事情,因此应以一般过去时为主表达文意,不能随心所欲地使用时态,造成不必要的失分。范文以一般过去时为主表达文意,符合记叙型人物介绍文的时态特点。
因记叙型人物介绍文以时间发生的先后为顺序交待文意,因此写作时应用好表示时间的过渡性词汇,如one day/morning/afternoon/evening/night, suddenly, first, then, just at that time, finally/at last/in the end。强调人物经过努力达到的良好结果可用thanks to, as a result, as a result of等过渡性词汇。范文用One day, Suddenly, Just at that time, Finally等表示时间的过渡性词汇,使文章语句更通顺,行文更连贯,逻辑更严密。
三、求职信中的人物介绍文写作注意点
请先看下面一篇书面表达实例:
假如你叫李芳,最近从报纸上了解到某公司欲招聘若干名翻译,你对这一工作颇感兴趣,请根据下表提供的信息,给公司经理写一封求职信。
范文:
Dear Manager,
I have learned from the newspaper that your company wants to hire a few people to be English interpreters. I’m interested in this position very much, and want to apply for it. I think I have a few advantages. Now, I’d like to introduce something about myself to you. I’m Li Fang, a 28-year-old woman. I’m in good health and I’m tall, slim and beautiful. Besides, I’m kind and polite to others and can get along well with others. Also, I’m good at expressing myself and I like to make friends with others. I graduated from the English department of Shandong University in 1999 and then I worked as an English teacher in a middle school for eight years. As a result, I have much work experience. If I’m accepted, I’ll work harder to make much progress. If you agree with me, please phone me. My telephone number is 0531-87654328.
Yours truly,
Li Fang
求职信中的人物介绍主要涉及人物外貌形象、健康状况、业余爱好、优秀品质和个人简历,常有下列规律性语言:介绍人物外貌可用…is tall, slim and beautiful. …is tall and strong. 介绍人物健康状况可用…is healthy/in good health. 介绍人物业余爱好可用…likes/is fond of/enjoys…in his/her spare/free time. …has many hobbies, such as…, …and…. 介绍人物热爱工作时可用…loves his/her work very much and works very hard.介绍人物经验丰富可用…has much work experience.介绍人物与人融洽相处可用…is kind/friendly to others. …likes to make friends with others. …can get along/on well with others.…is ready/willing to help others.介绍人物严于律己可用…is strict with himself/herself. …is strict in his/her work. 介绍人物获奖状况可用…is often elected a model…. …has been elected a model…many times.介绍人物受尊敬情况可用…is deeply respected and loved by others. …all respect and love…. 介绍人物变换工作地点可使用go to, come to, move to。范文使用I’m tall, slim and beautiful. I’m kind and polite to others and can get along well with others. I like to make friends with others. I have much work experience.等求职信人物介绍的规律性语言,提高了语言的规范度。
当然也必须注意求职信中人物介绍性内容的时态。人物外貌形象、健康状况、业余爱好、优秀品质属人物现在具有的特点,因此应以一般现在时为主表达文意。人物个人简历属在人物身上已经发生的事,因此应以一般过去时为主表达文意。范文用一般现在时介绍人物外貌形象、健康状况、业余爱好和优秀品质,用一般过去时介绍人物简历,符合求职信人物介绍时态特点。
写求职信介绍人物背景信息时还应贴切使用过渡性词汇。介绍人物的不同优秀品质可用besides, what’s more, at the same time, in the meanwhile, also, too等表示并列关系的过 渡性词汇。介绍人物简历时的过渡性词汇与专门人物介绍文中个人简历过渡性词汇相似。
范文使用Besides, Also, As a result等过渡性词汇,增加了语句间的连贯性和人物的可信度。
四、交友信中的人物介绍文写作注意点
请先看下面一篇书面表达实例:
假如你叫王晨,是北京一中高三学生,国际友谊俱乐部根据你的要求,把澳大利亚朋友贝蒂介绍给你为笔友。现在请你写一封信给贝蒂,表达愿意与其交友的愿望,并提供自己的有关信息(如下表所示),询问对方学习、生活和家庭情况。
字数:120左右。
范文:
Dear Betty,
I’m very glad to have a chance to be your pen pal. You were introduced to me by International Friendship Club because I wanted to have a pen friend in your country. I hope we’ll be good friends forever.
My name is Wang Chen and I am eighteen years old. I’m a senior grade 3 student of Beijing No. 1 Middle School. In our school, all the students study hard but are very happy. In my spare time, I like playing football, swimming, listening to music and singing songs. I’m optimistic and easy-going. I have a happy family and there are four people in it. They are my father, my mother, my younger sister and I. My father is an engineer; my mother is a teacher and my younger sister is also a student. We live in a small but beautiful town in Beijing with clean rivers and green mountains.
Dear Betty, can you tell me something about your study, life and family? I’m really very interested in it.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours truly,
Wang Chen
交友信中的人物介绍主要涉及姓名、性别、性格、业余爱好等人物现在具有的背景信息,因此应用一般现在时表达文意。有时交友信还简要介绍特定人物家庭成员现在具有的背景信息,因此也应用一般现在时表达文意。范文用一般现在时表达文意,符合交友信人物介绍文的时态特点。
写交友信对人物进行介绍时可用下列规律性语言:介绍人物姓名、年龄和职业可用My name is…and I’m…years old. I’m a/an…. 介绍人物家庭成员可用I have a happy family and there are…people in it. They are… and I. My…is a/an…and my…is a/an…. My…is also a…. 介绍人物业余爱好时可使用In my spare time I like…. I have many hobbies, such as…, …and….范文中出现的My name is Wang Chen and I am eighteen years old. In my spare time, I like….I have a happy family and there are four people in it. They are my father, my mother, my younger sister and I. My father is an engineer; my mother is a teacher and my younger sister is also a student. 是交友信中人物介绍文的规律性语言,有较为宽广的使用空间。