最近有一首少儿歌曲《卢沟谣》,作为《唱响中国》特别节目,忽然走红。其歌词构思顺畅,语象清新,大致不错。但其词句缺乏推敲,留下了不少破绽。试看其词:“永定河,出西山,碧水环绕北京湾。卢沟渡,摆渡船,渡走春秋渡秦汉。金中都,烟云散,留下古桥写江山。元明清,七百年,卢沟晓 Recently there was a children’s song ”Lo Ballad“, as ”sing China“ special program, suddenly became popular. The lyrics of the idea of ​​smooth, fresh language, generally good. But its lack of scrutiny of words, leaving a lot of flaws. Try its words: ”Yongding River, a Western Mountain, clear water around Beijing Bay. Luoguodu ferry boat, crossing the Qin and Han crossed the Spring and Autumn. 金中 都, Smoke and Cloud, leaving the ancient bridge to write the country. Year, Lugou Xiao