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★话题概述
语言与学习这一话题的内容主要包括:英式英语与美式英语的异同,语言与文化,语言学习中的困难,语言学习策略,等。
这一话题在中考写作中常见的体裁有记叙文和说明文。记叙文是叙述语言学习的规律,并给出建议;说明文(提纲类作文),即说明如何学习才能更好地掌握英语学习技巧,从而在听说读写等方面更快地提高英语等(材料分割成信息块,列成独立的文字信息)。
该类话题的写作以一般现在时为主,一般过去时(描述过去的学习经历)为辅,人称以第一人称或第二人称最为常见。
★高频词语
1.单词
learner, language, study (for), improve, guess, patient, enjoy, secret, way, increase,
understand, listening / speaking / writing /
reading, prefer, communicate / communic
ation, join, practice, learn (wisely), active, prepare (for), develop, remember, memorize, encourage, skill
2.短语
read the textbook, listen to tapes, take notes, learn from, make word cards, work with groups, help each other, do (gram
mar) exercise, read (English) aloud, watch English movies (programs), use / surf the Internet, keep a diary in English, use a dictionary, look it / them up in a dictionary, make mistakes in grammar, pay attention to, get / be / become interested in, try to do sth., word by word, word groups, instead of, get ready (for), etc.
★提分句型
1.I think you should / could...
2.find it 形容詞 (for sb.) to do sth.
3.Reading aloud is a good way to practice oral English.
4.the 比较级, the 比较级
5.so... that... 句型 / ... so that... 句型
6.You could try to improve your English by doing sth.
7.It?蒺s a good way to do sth.
8.It?蒺s 形容词 (for sb.) 动词不定式
9.remember to do sth. / remember doing sth.
10.You can do... over and over again until you...
★万能模板
How can we help make students inter
ested in their studies? Here are some suggestions.
First, we are supposed to have good study methods, such as (学法1), and ?摇(学法2). Then we can make great progress by (学法3). Next, it?蒺s important for students to have good health. So we should spend enough time
(健康方式) every day. Besides, we?蒺d better not put off what we can do today till tomorrow. We should (解决问题的方法) if we have some problems.
If you follow the advice, I?蒺m sure you will be successful.
★佳作赏评
为鼓励大家学好英语,学校准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请根据以下问题的提示并结合你的实际情况,以“My English Learn
ing”为题写一篇英文稿件,要求至少涉及其中的三个问题。
1.When did you start learning English?
2.How do you learn English?
3.What is difficult to learn?
4.What other helpful ways do you know to learn English well?
My English Learning
English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. At first, I found listening and reading are really difficult for me. So I have done lots of listening and reading practice. It helps me a lot. The more I listen and read, the better I can understand. Besides, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. I often watch English movies to develop my listening skills, enlarge my vocabulary by singing English songs and improve my writing abil
ities by keeping diaries every day.
I believe that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it.
【名师点评】
本文作者紧扣主题,并结合自己学习英语的经历有选择性地回答了三个问题,衔接有序,内容连贯,句式合理,主题(我学英语)明确,重点突出。
在词语的选择上,作者较好地运用了listen
ing and reading practice, develop my listen
ing skills, enlarge my vocabulary, improve my writing abilities, keep diaries, put one?蒺s heart into...等动词和短语(的搭配),还运用了相应的at first, so, besides等关联词语。
在句式的使用上,作者较好地采用了一些高频句型,比如:I started learning English when..., I found listening and reading are really difficult for..., it helps me a lot, the more... the better, by doing sth.,以及I believe that nothing is impossible...等。
当然,如果能将第二段的三个学习方法分成三个句子进行陈述,效果会更好一些。比如:I often watch English movies to develop my listening skills. It?蒺s also a good way to en
large my vocabulary by singing English songs. What?蒺s more, keeping diaries every day helps improve my writing abilities.
★典题例解
假设你是李华,你们学校正在对本校学生英语学习的情况进行调查,并征求同学们对英语教学的建议。请按下表提示,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的英语学习情况以及你对老师教学的建议。
■
要求:
1.词数100左右。开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2.所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息,并可作适当的发挥。
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
I am Li Hua.
I wish our school will consider my advice.
【2018·泰州中考题】
【写作指导】
第一步:审题目
从题目要求上看,本文是一篇说明文(提纲类作文)。主要內容有你对英语的认识、你目前的英语水平、你英语学习中存在的问题,以及你对英语教学的建议等。
由于提示内容说的都是目前的状况,故要用一般现在时来进行写作,人称要用第一人称单数形式。不过,在写对英语教学的建议时最好用一般将来时或含有should等情态动词的句子。
第二步:找要点
1.对英语的认识。提示内容有两点,可适当拓展。
2.目前的英语水平。提示内容有两点,可适当拓展。
3.存在的问题。提示内容有两点,可适当拓展。
4.对英语教学的建议。提示内容有表明至少要写出一点,可自由发挥。
第三步:列布局
1.对英语的认识。写作时要简单明了,更要注意前后句子之间的连贯性。
(1)英语是世界上使用最广泛的语言。
(2)英语有助于了解世界上不同的文化。
2.目前的英语水平和英语学习过程中存在的问题。
(1)能用英语与同学进行简单的交流。
(2)喜欢演讲,去年在校演讲比赛中获奖。
(3)不能正确地运用语法规则。
(4)写作中有时不能清楚地表达自己。
3.对英语教学的建议。提示内容有要求,至少要提出一条可行性建议。
第四步:定词语
依据所给提示内容,明确相关的英语词语搭配形式。
1.使用最广泛的语言——be the most widely used language;世界上——in the world
2.用英语——in English;与某人进行简单的交流——have simple communication with sb. 或communicate with sb. in simple English / in English simply;喜欢演讲——like speech es; 在校演讲比赛中——in the school speech contest / competition; 获奖——win the prize; 运用语法规则——use the grammar rules;在写作中表达自己——express oneself in writ ing;说慢些——speak more slowly 第五步:连句全文
在明确词语搭配后,就可以选择相应的句型来完成文章的写作。写句子时,注意条理性和衔接性,将句子有机联系在一起,使行文连贯,这样就能连句成篇了。
I am Li Hua. Here are some of my thoughts about English.
I think English is the most widely used language in the world. English helps us under
stand different cultures in the world. English also helps us improve our communication skills. At present I can communicate with my classmates in English simply. Making Eng
lish speeches is my favorite. I won the prize in the school speech contest last year. How
ever, I have some problems as well. I can?蒺t use the English grammar rules well and can?蒺t express myself clearly in writing, so I have to try my best to read more and do more grammar exercises.
As for my suggestions for English teaching, I think teachers should communi
cate more with us in English in class.
I wish our school will consider my advice.
★即時演练
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Linda为了来中国观看冬奥会而报名参加了汉语培训班,她最近写信向你询求关于学习汉语的建议。
请根据你自己的学习体会,给Linda写一封回信。
要求:
1.要包含所给提示的全部内容,可以适当拓展某些细节;
2.词数100左右。
语言与学习这一话题的内容主要包括:英式英语与美式英语的异同,语言与文化,语言学习中的困难,语言学习策略,等。
这一话题在中考写作中常见的体裁有记叙文和说明文。记叙文是叙述语言学习的规律,并给出建议;说明文(提纲类作文),即说明如何学习才能更好地掌握英语学习技巧,从而在听说读写等方面更快地提高英语等(材料分割成信息块,列成独立的文字信息)。
该类话题的写作以一般现在时为主,一般过去时(描述过去的学习经历)为辅,人称以第一人称或第二人称最为常见。
★高频词语
1.单词
learner, language, study (for), improve, guess, patient, enjoy, secret, way, increase,
understand, listening / speaking / writing /
reading, prefer, communicate / communic
ation, join, practice, learn (wisely), active, prepare (for), develop, remember, memorize, encourage, skill
2.短语
read the textbook, listen to tapes, take notes, learn from, make word cards, work with groups, help each other, do (gram
mar) exercise, read (English) aloud, watch English movies (programs), use / surf the Internet, keep a diary in English, use a dictionary, look it / them up in a dictionary, make mistakes in grammar, pay attention to, get / be / become interested in, try to do sth., word by word, word groups, instead of, get ready (for), etc.
★提分句型
1.I think you should / could...
2.find it 形容詞 (for sb.) to do sth.
3.Reading aloud is a good way to practice oral English.
4.the 比较级, the 比较级
5.so... that... 句型 / ... so that... 句型
6.You could try to improve your English by doing sth.
7.It?蒺s a good way to do sth.
8.It?蒺s 形容词 (for sb.) 动词不定式
9.remember to do sth. / remember doing sth.
10.You can do... over and over again until you...
★万能模板
How can we help make students inter
ested in their studies? Here are some suggestions.
First, we are supposed to have good study methods, such as (学法1), and ?摇(学法2). Then we can make great progress by (学法3). Next, it?蒺s important for students to have good health. So we should spend enough time
(健康方式) every day. Besides, we?蒺d better not put off what we can do today till tomorrow. We should (解决问题的方法) if we have some problems.
If you follow the advice, I?蒺m sure you will be successful.
★佳作赏评
为鼓励大家学好英语,学校准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请根据以下问题的提示并结合你的实际情况,以“My English Learn
ing”为题写一篇英文稿件,要求至少涉及其中的三个问题。
1.When did you start learning English?
2.How do you learn English?
3.What is difficult to learn?
4.What other helpful ways do you know to learn English well?
My English Learning
English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. At first, I found listening and reading are really difficult for me. So I have done lots of listening and reading practice. It helps me a lot. The more I listen and read, the better I can understand. Besides, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. I often watch English movies to develop my listening skills, enlarge my vocabulary by singing English songs and improve my writing abil
ities by keeping diaries every day.
I believe that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it.
【名师点评】
本文作者紧扣主题,并结合自己学习英语的经历有选择性地回答了三个问题,衔接有序,内容连贯,句式合理,主题(我学英语)明确,重点突出。
在词语的选择上,作者较好地运用了listen
ing and reading practice, develop my listen
ing skills, enlarge my vocabulary, improve my writing abilities, keep diaries, put one?蒺s heart into...等动词和短语(的搭配),还运用了相应的at first, so, besides等关联词语。
在句式的使用上,作者较好地采用了一些高频句型,比如:I started learning English when..., I found listening and reading are really difficult for..., it helps me a lot, the more... the better, by doing sth.,以及I believe that nothing is impossible...等。
当然,如果能将第二段的三个学习方法分成三个句子进行陈述,效果会更好一些。比如:I often watch English movies to develop my listening skills. It?蒺s also a good way to en
large my vocabulary by singing English songs. What?蒺s more, keeping diaries every day helps improve my writing abilities.
★典题例解
假设你是李华,你们学校正在对本校学生英语学习的情况进行调查,并征求同学们对英语教学的建议。请按下表提示,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的英语学习情况以及你对老师教学的建议。
■
要求:
1.词数100左右。开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2.所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息,并可作适当的发挥。
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
I am Li Hua.
I wish our school will consider my advice.
【2018·泰州中考题】
【写作指导】
第一步:审题目
从题目要求上看,本文是一篇说明文(提纲类作文)。主要內容有你对英语的认识、你目前的英语水平、你英语学习中存在的问题,以及你对英语教学的建议等。
由于提示内容说的都是目前的状况,故要用一般现在时来进行写作,人称要用第一人称单数形式。不过,在写对英语教学的建议时最好用一般将来时或含有should等情态动词的句子。
第二步:找要点
1.对英语的认识。提示内容有两点,可适当拓展。
2.目前的英语水平。提示内容有两点,可适当拓展。
3.存在的问题。提示内容有两点,可适当拓展。
4.对英语教学的建议。提示内容有表明至少要写出一点,可自由发挥。
第三步:列布局
1.对英语的认识。写作时要简单明了,更要注意前后句子之间的连贯性。
(1)英语是世界上使用最广泛的语言。
(2)英语有助于了解世界上不同的文化。
2.目前的英语水平和英语学习过程中存在的问题。
(1)能用英语与同学进行简单的交流。
(2)喜欢演讲,去年在校演讲比赛中获奖。
(3)不能正确地运用语法规则。
(4)写作中有时不能清楚地表达自己。
3.对英语教学的建议。提示内容有要求,至少要提出一条可行性建议。
第四步:定词语
依据所给提示内容,明确相关的英语词语搭配形式。
1.使用最广泛的语言——be the most widely used language;世界上——in the world
2.用英语——in English;与某人进行简单的交流——have simple communication with sb. 或communicate with sb. in simple English / in English simply;喜欢演讲——like speech es; 在校演讲比赛中——in the school speech contest / competition; 获奖——win the prize; 运用语法规则——use the grammar rules;在写作中表达自己——express oneself in writ ing;说慢些——speak more slowly 第五步:连句全文
在明确词语搭配后,就可以选择相应的句型来完成文章的写作。写句子时,注意条理性和衔接性,将句子有机联系在一起,使行文连贯,这样就能连句成篇了。
I am Li Hua. Here are some of my thoughts about English.
I think English is the most widely used language in the world. English helps us under
stand different cultures in the world. English also helps us improve our communication skills. At present I can communicate with my classmates in English simply. Making Eng
lish speeches is my favorite. I won the prize in the school speech contest last year. How
ever, I have some problems as well. I can?蒺t use the English grammar rules well and can?蒺t express myself clearly in writing, so I have to try my best to read more and do more grammar exercises.
As for my suggestions for English teaching, I think teachers should communi
cate more with us in English in class.
I wish our school will consider my advice.
★即時演练
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Linda为了来中国观看冬奥会而报名参加了汉语培训班,她最近写信向你询求关于学习汉语的建议。
请根据你自己的学习体会,给Linda写一封回信。
要求:
1.要包含所给提示的全部内容,可以适当拓展某些细节;
2.词数100左右。