失误原因:情感虚假套作题目:以“奶奶”为写作对象写一篇作文。①奶奶如水?这个比喻太诡异!一考生水是柔和的,在别人难过时去安慰他们;水是宽容的,在别人犯错误时去包容他们;水是无私的,在别人需要时,及时伸出援手而且从不图回报。②因盲目套作而写出病句。我蜷曲在家乡小溪旁的树桩旁,怎么也不曾想到总是安慰我、包容我的奶奶竟然会如此突兀地离开人世。看着眼前涓涓溪水,我与奶奶的美好回忆 Reasons for the error: emotional false coverings Title: “” Grandma "as the writing object to write an essay. ① grandmother like water? This metaphor is too weird! A test of water is gentle, to comfort them when others sad; water is tolerant, when others make mistakes to accommodate them; water is selfless, when others need, timely extension Aid and never return. ② because of blind writing and writing sick sentences. I curled up beside the tree stump in my hometown creek and never thought of always comforting me, and my grandmother, who tolerated it, would so unexpectedly leave. Looking at the trickle stream, my grandmother and memories