下面是一篇学生作文,以及老师对这篇作文的评改过程。为反映学生的真实水平,作文基本保持原貌,修改处用[]说明,增加处用()标出。■作文题目把握是力量和信心的表现。你多一分努力,就会多一分成功的把握。把握又是一种积极的行为。你把握住今天,就会拥有灿烂的明天;你把握住自我 The following is a student composition, as well as the teacher’s review of the composition. In order to reflect the true level of the students, the composition remains basically the same, and the modifications are marked with [], and the additions are marked with (). ■ Composition title grasp is a manifestation of strength and confidence. If you work harder, you will have more success. Grasping is another positive behavior. When you hold today, you will have a bright tomorrow; you hold yourself