随着人口出生率持续降低,城市化进程步伐加快,小班化成为了农村中学的普遍现象。针对学生作文千人一面、言之无物等弊端,笔者在教学中引导他们多融入自然、摘录筛选,并以面评指点为主要的作文批改方式,大大提升了作文课堂教学效率。 As the birth rate continues to decrease, the pace of urbanization accelerates and small-classization has become a common phenomenon in rural middle schools. In view of the disadvantages of the one-to-one writing of students and the absence of words, the author guides them to integrate into nature in their teaching, excerpts and excerpts, and reviews and approves them as the main form of essay writing, greatly improving the efficiency of composition teaching.