编者推荐:“画家”的事例能为本文所用:第一,落点在“从别人的手中拿回自己的画笔描绘人生”。第二,将同形词“本色”从此义“物品的原来颜色”向其彼义“本来的面貌”转移——先实后虚,彰显主旨。倒数第二自然段“面上拓展”之义,很好;但是,不如“画家”会变角度,暴露出“迟慧”的“本色”。 Editor’s recommendation: The example of “painter” can be used for this article: First, it is placed in “returning one’s own brush from someone’s hand to depict life”. Second, transfer the homonym “character” from this meaning “the original color of the item” to its “original appearance” - transfer it to the first place and show the subject. The penultimate natural segment “face development” is very good; but, as “artist ” will change the angle, exposing “lateness” “natural color”.