冯老师:拙作《乡村匠人》发表在贵刊2015年第11期上,样刊和老师的《散文诗日记》已收到,在此深表感谢!认真拜读了老师的文章后,我用三个字给予慨括。一是“精”;二是“精”;三还是“精”。一精:每篇日记的题目精,只一字,再也没法提炼和减少的余地。且每篇题目紧扣主题,精妙绝伦,恰到好处。二精:每篇日记的语言精。如《裁》中“没有季节的女人,成为没有情节的散文”;再如《笛》中“七斗星,成为天然笛孔”……看似普 Feng: My Own Work, “Village Tradesman,” was published in your issue no. 11, 2015. The diary of the prose and the teacher's diary have been received. Thank you very much. After carefully reading the teacher's essay, I used three Words to give generous support. First, “fine ”; second is “fine ”; three or “fine ”. A fine: the title of each diary essence, only a word, no longer no room for refining and reducing. And each topic closely linked to the theme, exquisite, just right. Two fine: each diary language fine. Such as “cut” in the “no season of the woman, no plot of the prose ”; another such as “flute” “Seven Doors, a natural flute”