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要写好人物,想把人物写得栩栩如生,首先得细细地观察人物?可以说,学会观察人物是写作的一项必不可少的基本功。有些同学一描写起自己的某个同学就是“一双大大的眼睛,笑起来脸上一对小酒涡”。如果你仔细观察周围的同学就会发现,笑起来脸上有“一对小酒涡”的同学实在是很少的。也有的同学喜欢照搬书上的一些人物描写,一写起老人就是“两鬓斑白,神采奕奕”,写起年轻人就是“漂亮潇洒,走起路来噔噔噔”。我读到一位同学是这样来描写一个姑娘的:“她像刚刚绽开的花朵,以奇妙的
If you want to write a good character and want to make characters vivid, you must first observe the characters carefully. It can be said that learning to observe characters is an essential basic skill of writing. Some classmates described one of their classmates as “a pair of big eyes and a pair of small wine vortexes on their faces.” If you look closely at the classmates around you, you will find that there are very few students who are smiling on the face and have “a pair of small wine vortex.” Some students also like to copy some characters depicted in the book. When you write about the old man, you are saying, “The two men are white, and they are brilliant, and they are brilliant.” To write young people is “beautiful and chic, walking up and walking.” I read a classmate who described a girl like this: "She looks like a flower that has just blossomed, with wonderful