这篇习作有几个方面可以肯定。首先是选材较好。写机关科室里人浮于事,以各种方式消磨时间。写入作品的“事件”是几个人轮流讲“门子”(故事),这些“门子”都庸俗可笑,这在作品情节的推进中有多层作用,①吸引读者;②反衬人物的无聊和环境的索然;③推进故事进程,等等。大故事中套进几个小故事,每个小故事都是一个笑话,读来非常轻松好笑。当然这些小故事单独看来有些不雅,但是结合到作品的内容却显得必要。 There are several aspects of this work can be sure. The first is better material selection. Organizations in the office writers floated things, killing time in a variety of ways. The “events” that are written into the works are those in which several people take turns to talk about “Men” (stories), all of which are vulgar and ridiculous. This has multiple roles in advancing the plot of the work, (1) attracting readers, Of course; ③ promote the story process, and so on. Big story into a few small stories, each story is a joke, read very easy funny. Of course, these little stories seem indecent on their own, but the content incorporated into the works is necessary.