I have read many books， they are all very meaningful and interesting. My favorite book is “Stories in Sahara”. It’s a book about living in foreign countries. It’s written by Echo. She is a famous writer in Tai Pei. I can learn a lot of living skills from it and I feel relaxed when I read it. It shows me a colorful world that I didn’t know before. I want to have such a great trip when I grow up. So I study harder and harder to make my dream come true.
　　How about you？ What’s your favorite book？
　　刘丽珍老师点评：
　　本文是以“My favorite book”为题的一篇作文。该生阅读广泛，所以写起来有话可说。他先表述看书的好处，然后描述最喜欢的书的名称、作者及该书的大概内容，最后说出自己的梦想以及实现梦想的决心。文章恰当地运用了三种不同的时态 ，还采用了时间状语从句和定语从句等复合句，并用了非谓语动词中的不定式作宾语和目的状语。老师只要稍加修改就是一篇好的范文。
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　　I have read many books， which are all very meaningful and interesting. My favorite book is “Stories in Sahara”. It’s a book about living in Sahara. It was written by Echo. She was a famous writer who was born in Tai Pei. I can learn a lot of living skills from this book and I feel relaxed every time I read it. It shows me a colorful world that I didn’t know before. I want to have such a great trip when I grow up. So I will study harder and harder to make my dream come true.
　　How about you？ What’s your favorite book？