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师:作为散文诗的经典名篇,《海燕》的语言颇富诗意。那么,本文诗意的语言有什么特点,或者说表现在哪些方面呢?下面,我们就通过两组选文的对比鉴赏来探讨这个问题,请看第1组。(屏显)【对比鉴赏1】甲:在苍茫的大海上,狂风卷集着乌云。在乌云和大海之间,海燕像黑色的闪电,在高傲地飞翔。乙:白蒙蒙的海面的上头,风儿在收集着阴云。在阴云和海的中间,得意洋洋地掠过了海燕,好像深黑色的闪电。
Teacher: As a famous classic prose poems, “Swallow” language is quite poetic. So, what are the characteristics of the poetic language in this article, or what are the aspects? In the following, we discuss this issue through the comparative appreciation of the two groups of electoral texts. (Screen display) 【Appreciation 1】 A: In the vast sea, the wind storm with dark clouds. Between dark clouds and the sea, the swallows flew like a black lightning. B: white top of the sea, the wind is collecting dark clouds. In the middle of the dark clouds and the sea, triumphantly crossed the petrel, like a dark black lightning.