《老同学》以全知视角,展示两位主人公“老胡”与“老孙”半个多世纪的人生遭际与心路历程,其文在创意构思及语言技巧方面有可取之处,但同时也存在不足,细述如下:首先,作品展现了两种迥异的生存姿态,但作者并非线性描绘他们的河东河西,沉浮沧桑,而是巧设隐性的灵之镜与物之镜,从内外两个不同世界去发掘人物生存理念与行为轨迹的对应 With the omniscience perspective, “Old Classmates” shows the tragedy and mentality of life of the two protagonists “Lao Hu” and “Lao Sun” for more than half a century, which has merit in creative ideas and language skills, but also exists Insufficient details are as follows: First of all, the work shows two different living gestures. However, instead of describing their Hedong Hexi linearly and undulating, Different world to explore the correspondence between the concept of living and the trajectory of the character