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通过对学生例文《山百合》进行评析,指出其不足之处和值得表扬的地方,告诉小作者和其他学生在学习中要丰富生活体验,积淀文学素养。
By analyzing the student mountain lily, pointed out its inadequacies and commendable place, told the small authors and other students in learning to enrich the life experience, accumulation of literary accomplishment.