结合今年高考批卷及平时作文训练实际,我以为话题作文的常见病如下:(一)结构方面1.一个长故事,一条小尾巴这种毛病主要出在写记叙文的考生卷子上:用六七百字写一件自己经历过的事或编造的故事,然后“蜻蜓点水”般议论—下,就草草续上尾巴了。这类学生的写作水平还停留在小学高 Combining this year’s college entrance examination papers and the actual training practice, I thought the common problems of topic composition are as follows: (1) Structure 1. A long story, a small tail This problem is mainly caused by the narrative of the examinee’s paper: One hundred words to write a story that they have experienced or make up, and then “like to talk about the water,” and continue to slop under the tail. The level of writing for these students remains at a high level in primary schools