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Hello！ I’m Chen Mingkun， I’m a student of Class 5 ， Grade 7. At school， my teachers and classmates are very kind to me. Now let me tell you something about my school life.
Class ① begin at 7：40a.m. I have four classes in the morning and two classes in the afternoon. I study Chinese， English， math， politics， art， history， geography， biology and some other subjects. English is my favorite subject. I think it’s very interesting. I often listen to English songs.. But I don’t like biology. I think it’s a little difficult and② bored .
After school， I often play basketball with my classmates. It’s my favorite outdoor activity. Yao Ming is my favorite basketball player. Sometimes I do some reading. I go to the school library every Wednesday and Thursday.
My school life is very interesting. I like it very much . What about yours？
習作点评
本文小作者述说了自己的校园生活，表达了对校园生活的喜欢。文章结构清楚，语言简洁，内容连贯，是一篇不错学生习作。
需要修改的地方如下：
①begin改为begins。注意主谓一致，主语class这里为单数，动词相应为第三人称单数。
②bored 改boring。此处形容词表示事物具有的特征应使用boring，bored用于表示情感。
Class ① begin at 7：40a.m. I have four classes in the morning and two classes in the afternoon. I study Chinese， English， math， politics， art， history， geography， biology and some other subjects. English is my favorite subject. I think it’s very interesting. I often listen to English songs.. But I don’t like biology. I think it’s a little difficult and② bored .
After school， I often play basketball with my classmates. It’s my favorite outdoor activity. Yao Ming is my favorite basketball player. Sometimes I do some reading. I go to the school library every Wednesday and Thursday.
My school life is very interesting. I like it very much . What about yours？
習作点评
本文小作者述说了自己的校园生活，表达了对校园生活的喜欢。文章结构清楚，语言简洁，内容连贯，是一篇不错学生习作。
需要修改的地方如下：
①begin改为begins。注意主谓一致，主语class这里为单数，动词相应为第三人称单数。
②bored 改boring。此处形容词表示事物具有的特征应使用boring，bored用于表示情感。