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Hello everyone， my name is April. I’m very glad to stand here and present my speech today. My speech today is “The internet and I”. In fact， my online life is very simple. I’m not a tech geek， and I’m not interested in playing computer games. But today， I’m coming from an average student.
As you see， the internet is everywhere in our lives. It’s hard to live without it. We use it to communicate and learn. In our spare time， we can also use it to browse the web and make friends with new people. From all around the world. It’s just like an cornucopia filled with abundant resources and wealth. In my opinion， this is the average person’s concept of it. However， today I would like to share another perspective， which is all the teenagers live it’s wasting by distracting people from learning and possibly even getting them addicted to it. Some people will even steal so that they have money to afford to go to internet bars and pay for their addiction. This is terrible！
Truthfully， we can’t say the internet is completely a good thing nor bad. The important thing is that we learn how to use it responsibly. I think I am thankful to the internet， so that it can help us learn and enhance our lives. I would also like to thank for creating TAOBAO and helping us to all save money！
At last， I must say that the internet has helped make the world a more colorful place！
成宇宏教师点评：
该演讲稿语言流畅，有句式变化，语法错误少，不影响意义理解，复杂句有三句以上。符合演讲稿文体，书写规范。上下文过渡自然，条理清晰，结尾点题。
审题欠清晰，虽然主题是The internet and I，但文中未曾侧重I的阐述。文章中心不够明确，论证不够充分，重点不够突出。语言运用可以更加通俗易懂。
Hi everyone， I am April from Class 1413. Do you like this song？ Do you know how I learned it？ I have learned this song from the internet， so today， I will talk about “the internet and I”.
As you see， the internet is so popular that we can’t live without it. It makes our life more convenient than before. In the past， people usually communicated by writing letters. It took a lot of time to wait for it. But now it is so easy， what we have to do is to send an email or chat online. We can also buy what we want online and save a lot of money.
However， its bad side also makes me worried.
When I was 12 years old， I loved a computer game called Mine Craft. In those days my grades got worse and worse. Fortunately， I got out of that game with the help of my dear teacher.
The internet， we can’t say， is completely good or bad. But I know， how to use it is up to myself， so， I will make good use of it and live a more colorful life.
As you see， the internet is everywhere in our lives. It’s hard to live without it. We use it to communicate and learn. In our spare time， we can also use it to browse the web and make friends with new people. From all around the world. It’s just like an cornucopia filled with abundant resources and wealth. In my opinion， this is the average person’s concept of it. However， today I would like to share another perspective， which is all the teenagers live it’s wasting by distracting people from learning and possibly even getting them addicted to it. Some people will even steal so that they have money to afford to go to internet bars and pay for their addiction. This is terrible！
Truthfully， we can’t say the internet is completely a good thing nor bad. The important thing is that we learn how to use it responsibly. I think I am thankful to the internet， so that it can help us learn and enhance our lives. I would also like to thank for creating TAOBAO and helping us to all save money！
At last， I must say that the internet has helped make the world a more colorful place！
成宇宏教师点评：
该演讲稿语言流畅，有句式变化，语法错误少，不影响意义理解，复杂句有三句以上。符合演讲稿文体，书写规范。上下文过渡自然，条理清晰，结尾点题。
审题欠清晰，虽然主题是The internet and I，但文中未曾侧重I的阐述。文章中心不够明确，论证不够充分，重点不够突出。语言运用可以更加通俗易懂。
Hi everyone， I am April from Class 1413. Do you like this song？ Do you know how I learned it？ I have learned this song from the internet， so today， I will talk about “the internet and I”.
As you see， the internet is so popular that we can’t live without it. It makes our life more convenient than before. In the past， people usually communicated by writing letters. It took a lot of time to wait for it. But now it is so easy， what we have to do is to send an email or chat online. We can also buy what we want online and save a lot of money.
However， its bad side also makes me worried.
When I was 12 years old， I loved a computer game called Mine Craft. In those days my grades got worse and worse. Fortunately， I got out of that game with the help of my dear teacher.
The internet， we can’t say， is completely good or bad. But I know， how to use it is up to myself， so， I will make good use of it and live a more colorful life.