同学们在“亲情”类的写作中,往往不能把内心的情感酣畅淋漓地表达出来,让人读来索然无味,这究竟是什么原因造成的呢?我们来看《妈妈的情书》这篇习作的修改前后,或许对你在写作中如何传情达意有一定的教益。 In the writing of the “kinship” class, the students often cannot express their innermost emotions in a dripping manner. It makes people uninteresting in reading. What causes this? Let’s look at “Mom’s Love Letter” Before and after the revision of the workbook, you may have some lessons about how you can convey feelings in writing.