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无论是话题作文,还是命题作文,因其“开放性”,可写的内容是很宽泛的。而对具体作文而言,所写内容必须集中。为此,就要善于限定范围。一、给命题的词加上修饰语湖北省宜昌市三峡高中唐尧同学在写“草”这个题目时,给它加上了“没有家园的”的修饰语。作文超常立意——批评“小草未找到适合自己成长的环境”。这种立意的方法是,依据题中的修饰语,展开描写,从而揭示文章的主旨“人要找到适合自己成长的环境”。此文刊登在本刊2005年1月号下半月。湖北省宜昌市三峡高中朱娟
Whether it is a topical composition or a propositional composition, because of its “openness”, the content that can be written is very broad. For specific essays, what they write must be concentrated. To do this, we must be good at defining the scope. First, to the proposition of the word with modifiers in Hubei Province, Yichang City, Hubei Province Three Gorges Senior High School Tangxi students wrote “grass” this topic, to give it a “no homeland” modifier. The composition is unusually philosophical--criticism, “The grass has not found a suitable environment for its own growth.” This way of thinking is to expand the description based on the modifiers in the title, thus revealing the main theme of the article: “People want to find an environment suitable for their own growth.” This article was published in the second half of the January 2005 issue of this issue. Three Gorges High School Zhu Juan, Yichang City, Hubei Province