如何扭转学生写作矫情假意、空洞肤浅的现状是长期困扰中学作文教学的一大难题。笔者认为,首先必须让学生拥有自己的话语权,真实反映自己的世界,“以我手写我心”。这样,审丑就成了他们必须认真面对的课题。其一,制度的欠缺、人性的弱点滋生了种种丑恶的事实,造成了审丑的客观? How to reverse the false status and shallowness of student writing is a major problem that has long puzzled the teaching of middle school composition. The author believes that we must first allow students to have their own right to speak and truly reflect their own world, “I write my heart.” In this way, reviewing ugliness has become a topic that they must seriously face. First, the weakness of the system and the weakness of human nature breed various ugly facts, resulting in the objective of judging ugliness.