As a particular genre,abstract is a growing field of study in linguistics.Move analysis is one aspect that has conducted to describe RA abstract.This article analyzed the particular genre with the purpose of helping them work out good abstracts for academic writing to improve their ability of doing research.One hundred abstracts were selected randomly from all the 450 graduation papers written by English-major pre-service teachers in 2010 in Hunan First Normal University in China.These informative abstracts were analyzed with the framework of Hyland’s 2000 Model.The results revealed that these English-major pre-service teachers haven’t done well in the abstract writing for their graduation paper,most of whom have no good understanding about the move model and move sequence,which implicates that explicit introduction of terms of genre,move and move sequence etc.,and training on how to write good abstracts in future study are really needed.