《中国花卉盆景》88年第八期(插三)发表了沈连清同志制作的雀梅桩景《翠云飞舞》。依我们之见,该桩景不能说是精品。现提出几点不成熟的观点,供参考。从图片上看,此桩置在一个盆中较满的椭圆形盆中,桩景较为苍老、纯朴,具有一种自然的风格。但该桩景的最大弊端是没有处理好造型中“疏与密”、“虚与实”之间的关系。此桩大小八个云片上下相叠,平行相连,枝叶壅塞,密不透 Eighth China Flower Bonsai 88 (Issue 3) Published a picture of “Flying Cui Yun,” a bird’s eye view of a bird’s nest made by Comrade Shen Lianqing. In our opinion, the pile can not be said to be fine. Now put forward a few immature point of view for reference. From the picture point of view, this pile of piles in a full oval basin pot, the pile is more old, simple, with a natural style. However, the biggest drawback of this pile scene is that it does not deal with the relationship between “sparse and dense” and “virtual reality” in modeling. The pile size of eight clouds up and down, stacked in parallel, connected branches, crowded, impermeable