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同样的题材,不同的处理,表达的中心截然不同。高中语文第一册(试验本)写作部分第二单元片段作文第1题:下面两段文字的中心各是什么?比较一下,哪段文字能更好地表现中心,用一、二百字简述道理。(甲)在一座小小的火车站,工作人员发现一位怀抱婴儿的年轻妇女在站台上长久地徘徊。一问,才知道她在等候上前线的军列,盼望见丈夫一面——也许是最后一面。五天五夜过去了,当军列驶
The same theme, different treatment, and the center of expression are very different. High School Chinese Volume One (Test Book) Writing Part Two Unit Fragment Essay Part One: What are the centers of the following two paragraphs of text? Compare which ones can better represent the center and use one or two hundred characters The truth. (A) At a small train station, the staff found a young woman with a baby lingering on the platform for a long time. When asked, she learned that she was waiting for the front line and looked forward to seeing her husband - perhaps the last. Five days and five nights passed, when the army was out