Nowadays， with the rapid development of economy， people’s living levels have improved a lot， but ideological levels have improved little. For example， there are more and more cars， but the number of people who don’t obey the traffic rules also increases.
　　As can be seen， one of the causes is drunk driving， which is a common social phenomenon. Some people drink because of the troubles from working or the short impulse， even if they need to drive then. So the result is that they drive after drinking. This behavior is extremely irresponsible to people’s safety. The people who drive after drinking will do something abnormal that may lead to serious traffic accidents. Not only could they get injured， but also they are likely to bump into other cars， even knock down the people walking on the road. Additionally， it may give rise to traffic jam. So drunk driving is very dangerous.
　　For our safety， drivers should remember not to drive after drinking， and the government should make more strict rules and systems. There is no doubt that if everyone obeys the traffic rules and does not drive after drinking， our lives will be much better.
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