不久前,笔者给学生布置了一篇以“亲情”为话题的作文。应该说,这道作文题贴近学生的生活,不会出现“巧妇难为无米之炊”的问题,难度并不大。但是,将这个题目写出新鲜感,写得不落窠臼,也并非一件易事。果然,待学生将作文交上来之后,笔者在批阅的时候发现,不少学生虽然能表达出自己对亲情的理解,材料比较充实,感情也算真挚,但是故事模式略显呆板,读起来总会 Not long ago, I arranged for the students to “affection ” for the topic of composition. It should be said that this essay questions close to the student’s life, does not appear “cleverness is no straw” issue, the difficulty is not large. However, it is not an easy task to write down the freshness and write down the subject. Sure enough, after the students will be submitted to the composition, the author found in the time of review, although many students can express their understanding of affection, material more substantial, feelings are also sincere, but the story mode slightly stiff, read always