编者推荐:这个题目拟得很成功,它很形象,它字面远离话题的‘挫折’字,而其蕴含聚焦于‘挫折’。文末提出‘直面挫折’,为另一变格文章‘人生需要放大镜’留下了写作空间。但是,第三自然段中的‘体谅’应改为‘敬佩’。 Editor’s recommendation: This topic is intended to be very successful. It is very graphic. It is literally away from the ‘frustration’ word of the topic and its implications are focused on ‘frustration’. At the end of the paper, he proposed ’face-to-face frustration’ and left a writing space for another unsuitable article, ’Life needs a magnifying glass’. However, the ‘conscientiousness’ in the third paragraph should be changed to ‘admiration’.