今年暑假的一天上午,我和爸爸去小区跑步。跑到河边的时候,我们看见有好多人在钓鱼,我也想钓鱼。于是我和爸爸也去家里各拿了鱼竿和桶,也去河边钓鱼。到了钓鱼的地方,我拿起鱼竿,开始钓起了鱼来。半个小时过去了,我还是没钓到鱼,可一看,爸爸已经钓了几条鱼了。来到小区河边耐心等待鱼儿上钩尝试一下来到河边大丰收,鱼钩上什么也没有,一看,这地方很安静文章开头交代时间,应简练,没必要这么具体。造句不仅要通顺,还要精练。真是羡慕、嫉妒、恨!我不想输给爸爸,硬着头皮继续钓鱼。可是又过了半小时,还是一无所获,我实在是没有耐心 One morning this summer, my father and I run to the district. When we ran to the river, we saw a lot of people fishing, I also want to fish. So my father and I went to the house each took a fishing rod and bucket, but also to the river fishing. At the place of fishing, I picked up the fishing rod and began to catch the fish. Half an hour later, I still did not catch the fish, can see, my father has caught a few fish. Came to the community to wait patiently fish hooked Try to come to the river harvest, there is nothing on the hook, a look, this place is very quiet article at the beginning account time, should be concise, no need to be so specific. Not only to make sentences fluent, but also concise. Really envy, jealous, hate! I do not want to lose to father, bite the bullet and continue fishing. But after another half an hour, or nothing, I am really impatient