编者推荐:“你在那样的环境中积极工作”——承上启下,从“适应环境”提升到“利用环境”的层面。此文还需要升格:“你是天上派来的精灵”以后的文字太直白,应继续用描述的手法出之,让读者在意象中感悟“根”与“精灵”“如此相像”。有关“被人瞧不起”“被人忽视”的语句,应修改为“受人尊重”之意;否则,有失偏颇。标题改为“根花”! Editor’s recommendation: “You work actively in that kind of environment ” - from the perspective of “adapting to the environment ” to “using the environment ”. This article also needs to be upgraded: “You are the elves that are sent from heaven”. The following words are too straightforward. You should continue to use the description method to let the readers perceive the “root” and “elf” in the image. “So like ”. Regarding the phrase “being ignored” and “ignored by others”, it should be modified to mean “respect by others”; otherwise, it would be biased. Change the title to “root flower”!