学期末,市进修学校对全市五年级学生的语文、数学两个科目进行了统考,阅卷时我负责评语文试卷的作文部分。说实话,本次作文的难度不大,命题也简单,要求写一件父母关心孩子的小事,从中感受到平凡的父母之爱。文中要求“要抓住人物外貌、语言、动作、神态等方面的具体描写,借以表达人物的内心情感”。评卷过程中我发现,学生作文总体上写得不错,选材得体,语句通 At the end of the semester, the City Advanced Learning School conducted a test on two subjects of the fifth grade in the city, including language and math. When marking, I was responsible for the essay part of the assessment paper. To be honest, this essay is not difficult, the proposition is also simple, asked to write a little thing their parents care about their children, from which ordinary parents feel the love. The article requires “to seize the character description, language, action, demeanor and other aspects of the specific description, in order to express the person’s inner feelings ”. During the marking process, I found that students’ compositions are generally well written, well-selected materials and sentences