这是一篇探索人生真谛的随笔,作品对人生问题的探索和与此相联系的构思、写法都有可取之处。从年轻人的角度而言,由于社会经验缺乏,往往在成绩面前沾沾自喜,骄傲自大,而在挫折面前却经不起考验,灰心丧气,失去信心。作者针对这个问题提出了自己的见解,认为一个人取得成绩固然很重要,或者说是一种财富,但在受到挫折时,就很少有人认为也是一种财富了。他认为:“一个人假如一生都没有成功过固然痛苦,假如不幸没有失败过也不开心。没有失败过和没有成功过,其实都一样,未能真正领会真实的人生。”于是作者把体验人生的成功与失败作为人生的重要经验。对于没有体会过失败的青年人,在某种程度上“求败”,迎接各种磨难,甚至比取得成功更为重要。这是作者所强调的人生议题。作者为了强调青年人不要畏惧挫折,逃避失败,特别从“求败”角度来阐明道理,从武侠小说中的“求败”故事来诠释失败也是一种人生经验的重要组成部分。只有失败之后才会有求得“发芽的心情”,求得将来的更好发展,这对人的成长来说至关重要,“跨过去,春天不远了。我永远不要失去发芽的心情!”作者从台湾作家林清玄的文章起笔,引出话题,再层层深入,步步论述,最后谈出自己的看法,使文章的主题得以升华。 This is an essay that explores the true meaning of life. The work’s exploration of life issues and the ideas and writing associated with it all have merit. From the perspective of young people, due to the lack of social experience, they often feel complacent in the face of their achievements. They are proud and arrogant, but they cannot withstand the setbacks in frustration and lose heart and lose confidence. The author puts forward his own opinions on this issue. He thinks that it is very important for a person to get a grade, or that it is a kind of wealth. However, when it comes to setbacks, few people think that it is also a kind of wealth. He believes: “A person who is unsuccessful in his life is certainly in pain. If unfortunately he has not failed, he is not happy. Without failure and without success, they are all the same, failing to truly understand the true life.” Success and failure are important experiences in life. For young people who have not experienced failure, to some extent, “seeking defeat” and meeting various hardships are even more important than achieving success. This is the subject of life that the author emphasizes. In order to emphasize that young people should not be afraid of setbacks and escape failure, especially from the perspective of “seeking defeat” to clarify the truth, the interpretation of failure from the “seeking defeat” story in the martial arts novel is an important part of life experience. Only after failure will there be a “germinating mood” and a better development in the future. This is crucial for people’s growth. "We will not be far behind in the spring. I will never lose my budding feeling! The author started writing from the article by Taiwanese writer Lin Qingxuan, elicited a topic, deepened it in depth, and discussed it step by step. Finally, he spoke his own opinions and made the subject of the article sublimated.