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在批阅中考作文时我们发现:写同—个话题,用类似的题材,有的立意平庸,有的立意脱俗,文章的优劣高下立现。归纳立意的“平庸”,主要有下列三种:一是“老调重弹”。四川省2003年考话题作文“交往”,有的考生还在写自己与父母有“代沟”,一次生病时被母亲冒雨背到医院,睁眼看到母亲红红的眼睛,终于感情沟通,感受到母爱……这类材料从小学三年级开始就写,年年写,只能给人“面目可憎”之感。二是“人有我有大家有”。言人所已言,浅尝辄止,千人一面。例如写“交往”,跳不出“因某件事友谊破裂——后又恢复——悟出交往需要宽容(或
In reviewing the composition of the test, we found that: writing the same topic, using similar topics, some of the ideas mediocre, some of the intentions refined, the merits and demerits of the article heightened. To sum up the concept of “mediocrity”, there are mainly the following three: First, “the old tune.” In 2003, in Sichuan Province, the topic “communicative” was written on the topic. Some candidates still wrote “generation gap” with their parents. When they were sick, their mother took the rain and went to the hospital. When they got sick, they saw the red eyes of the mother and finally they communicated with their feelings. To motherhood... This kind of material was written from the third grade of primary school and was written year after year. It can only give people the feeling of “frightening appearance”. The second is “I have everyone we have.” What people have said is to say something, and try to stop it. There are thousands of people. For example, when you write “communicating,” you can’t jump out of “because something broke down after friendship broke down — and then you recover — you need to be tolerant of communication (or