悟空在周记中这样写道:“今天,我们师徒俩一同去了附近的一所寺庙。这是座远近闻名的千年古刹,很多游客都恭恭敬敬地上香行礼,贡献祭品,祈福消灾。”“悟空,为师发现你现在越来越会观察了,作文也写得越来越生动了!不过,这段话中有一个词你用得不够恰当!”“哪个词?”“贡献。应该换成‘供献’。‘供’字是‘提供’的‘供’!” Wukong wrote this week: “Today, both our teachers and students went to a nearby temple, which is a well-known Millennium temple, and many tourists respectfully present incense, offer sacrifices and pray for happiness Disaster. ”“ Wukong, the teacher found that you are now more and more observed, the composition is also written more and more vivid! However, there is a word in this passage you are not properly used! ”“ Which Words? ”" Contribution. Should be replaced by ’for contributions’.’ For ’is provided’ for ’!’