此文有两处非常之笔墨——“一个扎着羊角辫的小女孩坐在上面,双手托着腮帮,胳膊肘儿支在腿上,晃着脑袋,哼着曲儿,逗得全家人直乐”和“一家五口吃得多开心呀。再看那小女孩,还不能熟练地握着筷子,却要为爷爷奶奶搛菜哩”——反入正出“心中有股莫名的悲哀”。标题宜改为“故乡的老宅子”。 There are two very inked words in this article - “A little girl with a horned owl is sitting on it, holding the gangs with both hands, holding his elbows on his lap, shaking his head, and licking his cheeks, amuses the whole family. People’s straight music ”and“ how much fun a family of five eats. Look at the little girl, still can’t skillfully hold the chopsticks, but want to serve the grandparents 哩”--into the positive out“ The stock’s inexplicable sadness.” The title should be changed to “Old Home in the Hometown”.