叙事写人的习作少不了对人物动作的描写,为的是通过人物的动作来展开故事情节,表现人物形象,表达作者感情。但有些同学常常让动作“动”不起来,或者“动”得模糊。这样,笔下的人物形象就显得非常单薄,不能活 Writing narrative writing indispensable to describe the action of the characters, in order to expand the plot of the story through the action of characters, the performance of the image of the characters to express the feelings of the author. But some students often make the action “move ” not up, or “move ” fuzzy. In this way, the characters under the pen appear very thin, can not live