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编者推荐:此文“一以贯之”——从写事到写景,再从写碑文到写感受,都贯穿“充实”“关爱”两个方面:思路十分清晰。看来,写“思想转变”的作文也不一定就必然是“大路货”——作者在碑文内容及其主人的选择上严格遵守了第一自然段的要求。但是,此文命题宜只就某一个方面进行续写,以使文章内容及其主旨更集中。
Editor’s recommendation: This article “a consistent” - from writing to writing, and then from writing inscriptions to writing feelings, both through the “enrichment” and “caring” in two aspects: the idea is very clear. It seems that the writing of “thought change” does not necessarily necessarily mean “big goods” - the author strictly complied with the requirements of the first paragraph in the inscription and the owner’s choice. However, this article should only be written on one aspect in order to make the content of the article and its subject matter more focused.