编者推荐:此文提供了“展开描述”的宝贵经验——行动描写与心理描写交替进行。我选择走小路回家。刚下过雨,空气湿润,格外清爽,雨水给小路铺上了一层薄薄的泥浆,不太好走。走过这片树林,路好走了些,于是加快脚步。正走着,抬头远望,突然一惊:远处竟有两条狗!我的脚步不觉地放慢了。走近了,真的是两条大狗,一条黑色,一条灰白色,耳朵竖着,正从桥头走来。 Editor’s Note: This article provides an invaluable experience of “Describing Descriptors” - alternating action descriptions with psychological descriptions. I choose to take the path home. Just rained, humid air, especially fresh, rain to the road covered with a thin layer of mud, not too good to go. Walked through the woods, the road is better away, so speed up the pace. Is walking, looking up, suddenly surprised: There are actually two dogs in the distance! My footsteps slowed down. Approached, really two big dogs, a black, an off-white, ears, is coming from the bridge.