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一她的改变是从周报上发表作文开始的。她,语、数、英的成绩都落在末尾。与同桌吵架,能说会道,一提笔,前言不搭后语,看得人云里雾里,豆腐块点大小的作文,满是红笔痕迹。作文像挤牙膏,一堂课写不了几个字,东漏一个字,西少一个词,恨不得找来批评一顿。一次,她写《思念》:今天是阴历二月初二。人家说,二月初二是龙抬头,还有一个习俗就是要吃年糕。今天也正是哥哥的生日。很可惜,哥哥不在家。同学说:“看着天空,望
One of her changes began with the publication of essays in the weekly newspaper. She, language, number, English results are at the end. Quarrel with the same table, can speak, pen, foreword not take the aftermath, see people foggy, tofu block size of the essay, full of red pen traces. Writing like squeezing toothpaste, a class can not write a few words, the east leak a word, a word less west, could not wait to criticize meal. Once, she wrote ”miss“: Today is the lunar second day of February. People say that the second day of February is the rise of the dragon, and another custom is to eat rice cakes. Today is also my brother’s birthday. Unfortunately, my brother is not at home. Students said: ”Looked at the sky, hope