批改作文和指导学生写作是语文老师教学过程中十分重要的环节,我们常常发现有这样的现象:语言表达能力好的学生写出来的作文得分很低,甚至还比不上表达能力不如他的学生;一些学生的写作能力总是停滞不前,写与不写一个样;堂上写限时作文,快要交卷了作文纸上只有寥寥数字……学生患上作文麻木病、恐惧病。限时作文的时间一般只有40分钟左右,许多学生写起来丢三落四,常常忽略 Correcting essay and guiding students’ writing is a very important part in the process of teaching Chinese language teachers. We often find that there is such a phenomenon that students with good verbal ability have very low essay writing scores or even less than those who can not express themselves ; Some students are always stagnant ability to write, write and not write a like; classroom write limited time essay, almost to hand over the essay paper only a handful of numbers ... Students suffering from writing numb disease, fear disease. Limited time writing is generally only about 40 minutes, many students write omissions, often ignored