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上海东方电视台长消息《一次成功的迫降》曾荣获1998年度中国广播电视新闻奖一等奖。笔者认为:这条消息的成功之处有三点:一、这是一条真正意义上的新闻;二、画面中出现的许多经典镜头(如飞机迫降时在跑道上擦出的耀眼火光)让人过目不忘;三、现场感强。但细细推敲,这条消息在画面编辑和解说词写作上仍有一些值得商榷的地方。 首先看导语:“昨天晚上,因一架麦道——11大型民航客机前起落架发生机械故障,使虹桥机场上空出现了惊险的一幕。由于机组人员沉着应变、地面指挥果断正确,最终使飞机成功迫降在虹桥机场。上海市领导黄菊、徐匡迪、陈良宇、孟建柱等亲临现场,部署指挥了这次成功的迫降。”
Shanghai Oriental TV news of “a successful landing force” won the 1998 China Radio and Television News Prize first prize. The author believes that there are three points to the success of this message: First, this is a real news story. Second, many classic shots appearing on the screen (such as the dazzling flare emanating from the runway when an airplane is forced down) Do not forget; Third, strong sense of the scene. However, careful scrutiny of this message still has some debatable aspects of screen editing and commentary writing. First, read the guideline: "Last night, due to a mechanical failure of a McDonnell-11 large landing gear on a commercial airliner, a thrilling scene took place over Hongqiao Airport. As a result of the crew’s calmness, the ground command was decisive and correct, Successfully landing in Hongqiao Airport.Shanghai leaders Huang Ju, Xu Kuangdi, Chen Liangyu, Meng Jianzhu and others came to the scene to deploy and direct the successful landing.