【评介】前半首,是一个谜,后半者,揭了谜底。“老鼠见了快快逃”,是揭谜的开始。结尾两行,才把谜底点得一清二楚。这种先设悬念,再慢慢把诗引向高潮的写法,是能够抓住小读者的好奇心的。这首儿歌,不同于一般的诗,把最警策的一句,放在最后。它妙就妙在开头第一句“弯弯腰,造座桥”,这是形象地(也可以说是诗化地)抓住 【Comment】 first half, is a mystery, the latter half, exposing the answer. “Mice see fled quickly” is the beginning of the mystery. The end of two lines, only clear answers to the point. This preconceived suspense, and then slowly poem to the climax of the wording, is able to grasp the curiosity of small readers. This song is different from the first verse of poetry, the most cautionary one, at the end. It is wonderful wonderful at the beginning of the first sentence “bend over, build bridge”, which is vivid (also can be said that poetic) to seize