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“看图作文”题要求考生根据图画内容、所给的关键词、所提供的题材写出一篇语法正确、意思连贯、符合逻辑的英语短文。下面谈谈“看图作文”题的解题步骤与思路:
1. 审清题意
考生在动笔之前要认真阅读命题人提出的要求,明确作文的中心思想,确定重点内容。它可以是记叙文,也可以是说明文。考生应先根据图画和试题的要求来确定文体。
2. 观察图画,发挥想象,构思文章
看懂图是写好短文的前提。看懂图,可以帮助确定文体、人称和时态。如果是一篇日记或故事,宜采用一般过去时;如果是人或事的简介,宜采用一般现在时。考生在看图时要观察人物及人物的动作、行为、表情及他们之间的关系。此外,还要确定物品及物品的形态、位置、大小以及事件的背景等。考生要运用想象力,对图画内容进行必要的发挥和延伸。之后要认真研读英文提示词语,以免遗漏其中的“要点”。
3. 找重点,列提纲,逐图描述
写作前,考生应先在草稿纸上列一个提纲。这样做,就能使写作思路清晰,避免涂改,节省时间。列提纲时,要求结合图示,选定单词、词组、句式;要求尽量扬长避短,避难就易;还要求选用符合英文表达习惯的句式,充分利用提示词语。逐图描述时,图文意思要一致,语言文字要连贯,语法要正确无误。
下面是(2008年湖北咸宁市的中考“看图作文”。
“地震无情,人有情”,大灾过后,灾区的小朋友们却度过了一个自己终生难忘的“六一”儿童节!
请你仔细观察下面的三幅图,根据图示内容,以“A Special Children’s Day”为题,写一篇短文。
提示词语:from disaster areas(灾区),unforgettable(难忘的)
【思路点拨】 (1) 审题:看懂图画的基本含义:著名歌唱家和灾区的孩子们共度“六一”,灾区的孩子们度过了一个难忘的节日。 (2) 确定下列要点:① 著名歌唱家和孩子们一起过节 ② 与灾区孩子们共度“六一” ③ 歌唱家送给孩子们礼物。 (3) 确定时态:用一般过去时。
【参考范文】
A Special Children’s Day
Children’s Day is a great day for the children from disaster areas! They had an unforgettable Children’s Day this year! People all over the country were caring about them.
There were many special concerts held for them. In the concerts,they could sing with the famous singers like Liu Dehua. Some of them were invited to enjoy the day with other children from big cities. They sang,danced and played games together. The singers gave children many gifts such as books,dolls,and backpacks.
I believe it was the happiest Children’s Day they had spent so far! How lucky they were!
【练一练】
1. 请你就以下五幅图写一篇短文,描述你昨天乘公交车去看电影途中的经历,向学校墙报投稿。词数80个左右。
2. 根据图片内容及英语提示词写一篇80个词左右的短文。开头句子已经给出,但是不计入总词数。
提示词语:Zhang Hong,Han Mei,much help
Granny Wang is over seventy. She has no children,but she often gets much help from others. ...
【参考范文】
1. Yesterday I wanted to see a film,so I took a bus to the cinema. I was sitting in the bus when I saw an old lady getting on. I stood up at once and offered my seat to her. The old lady sat down happily and thanked me. When the bus stopped in front of the cinema,I got off and waved goodbye to her.
2. Granny Wang is over seventy. She has no children,but she often gets much help from others.
Zhang Hong and Han Mei are classmates. Both of them are Young Pioneers. On Sundays,they often help Granny Wang do some housework. Yesterday morning,they did some washing at Granny’s house and they went out to buy some rice,vegetables and fruit for her. Then they took Granny Wang to the park to watch the flower show. They had a good time together.
Granny Wang enjoys a happy life in her late year.
1. 审清题意
考生在动笔之前要认真阅读命题人提出的要求,明确作文的中心思想,确定重点内容。它可以是记叙文,也可以是说明文。考生应先根据图画和试题的要求来确定文体。
2. 观察图画,发挥想象,构思文章
看懂图是写好短文的前提。看懂图,可以帮助确定文体、人称和时态。如果是一篇日记或故事,宜采用一般过去时;如果是人或事的简介,宜采用一般现在时。考生在看图时要观察人物及人物的动作、行为、表情及他们之间的关系。此外,还要确定物品及物品的形态、位置、大小以及事件的背景等。考生要运用想象力,对图画内容进行必要的发挥和延伸。之后要认真研读英文提示词语,以免遗漏其中的“要点”。
3. 找重点,列提纲,逐图描述
写作前,考生应先在草稿纸上列一个提纲。这样做,就能使写作思路清晰,避免涂改,节省时间。列提纲时,要求结合图示,选定单词、词组、句式;要求尽量扬长避短,避难就易;还要求选用符合英文表达习惯的句式,充分利用提示词语。逐图描述时,图文意思要一致,语言文字要连贯,语法要正确无误。
下面是(2008年湖北咸宁市的中考“看图作文”。
“地震无情,人有情”,大灾过后,灾区的小朋友们却度过了一个自己终生难忘的“六一”儿童节!
请你仔细观察下面的三幅图,根据图示内容,以“A Special Children’s Day”为题,写一篇短文。
提示词语:from disaster areas(灾区),unforgettable(难忘的)
【思路点拨】 (1) 审题:看懂图画的基本含义:著名歌唱家和灾区的孩子们共度“六一”,灾区的孩子们度过了一个难忘的节日。 (2) 确定下列要点:① 著名歌唱家和孩子们一起过节 ② 与灾区孩子们共度“六一” ③ 歌唱家送给孩子们礼物。 (3) 确定时态:用一般过去时。
【参考范文】
A Special Children’s Day
Children’s Day is a great day for the children from disaster areas! They had an unforgettable Children’s Day this year! People all over the country were caring about them.
There were many special concerts held for them. In the concerts,they could sing with the famous singers like Liu Dehua. Some of them were invited to enjoy the day with other children from big cities. They sang,danced and played games together. The singers gave children many gifts such as books,dolls,and backpacks.
I believe it was the happiest Children’s Day they had spent so far! How lucky they were!
【练一练】
1. 请你就以下五幅图写一篇短文,描述你昨天乘公交车去看电影途中的经历,向学校墙报投稿。词数80个左右。
2. 根据图片内容及英语提示词写一篇80个词左右的短文。开头句子已经给出,但是不计入总词数。
提示词语:Zhang Hong,Han Mei,much help
Granny Wang is over seventy. She has no children,but she often gets much help from others. ...
【参考范文】
1. Yesterday I wanted to see a film,so I took a bus to the cinema. I was sitting in the bus when I saw an old lady getting on. I stood up at once and offered my seat to her. The old lady sat down happily and thanked me. When the bus stopped in front of the cinema,I got off and waved goodbye to her.
2. Granny Wang is over seventy. She has no children,but she often gets much help from others.
Zhang Hong and Han Mei are classmates. Both of them are Young Pioneers. On Sundays,they often help Granny Wang do some housework. Yesterday morning,they did some washing at Granny’s house and they went out to buy some rice,vegetables and fruit for her. Then they took Granny Wang to the park to watch the flower show. They had a good time together.
Granny Wang enjoys a happy life in her late year.