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无论高考作文还是平时写作,抑或课内外阅读,多知一点景物写技是相当必要的。1.总分描写法。如朱自清的《荷塘月色》描写荷塘四周的树时,先总写“荷塘的四面,远远近近,高高低低都是树”。“这些树将一片荷塘重重围住”。而后分写:树色——“是阴阴的,乍看像一团烟雾”;树姿——“杨柳的丰姿,便在烟雾里也辨得出”;树梢——“树梢上隐隐约约的是一带远山,只有大意罢了”;树缝——“树缝里也漏着一两点路灯光,没精打彩的,是渴睡人的眼睛”;树上——“这时候最热闹的,要数树上的蝉声与水里的蛙声”。这样先总勾轮廓后展开细致描写,给人以全面而具体的印象。2.视角描写法。对景物的观察和描写,“横看成岭侧成峰,远近高低各不同”。同一描写对象,远看、近观;平
Regardless of whether the college entrance examination composition is written at ordinary times, or reading inside or outside class, it is necessary to know more about the scenery writing techniques. 1. Total score description. Such as Zhu Ziqing’s “Moonlight over the Lotus Pond,” when describing the trees around the lotus ponds, he first wrote “The four sides of lotus ponds are far and near, and the heights are the trees.” “These trees will be surrounded by a pond.” Then write: Tree color - “Yin Yin, at first glance to look like a cloud of smoke ”; Shuzi - “ Willow’s abundance, then also identified in the smoke ”; treetop - “The faint vagrants on the tops of the trees are distant hills, and only the big ones are missing.” The tree seams - “The tree slits are also leaking one or two lights. They are sluggish. They are the eyes of the thirsty people. ”The tree--“ The most lively time at this time is to count the buzzing in the trees and the frogs in the water.” In this way, the first outline of the outline of the first detailed description, giving a comprehensive and concrete impression. 2. Perspective description method. Observations and descriptions of the scenery, “viewing into the side of the mountain into the peak, different levels from far and near”. The same description object, far-seeing, close-up; flat