中学生写作文,比较突出的问题,是做不到具体生动,难以引起读者感情上的共鸣。这其中的主要原因是缺少细节,缺少真实细腻、饱含真情的细节描写。语文教师有责任引导学生在写记叙文时,注重细节描写,让文章更具体、生动,有血有肉。 Secondary school students writing essay, more prominent problems, can not do concrete vivid, difficult to cause the reader’s emotional resonance. The main reason for this is the lack of details, the lack of real detail, full of true details of the description. Language teachers have the responsibility to guide students in writing narratives, pay attention to the details of the description, so that articles more specific, vivid, flesh and blood.