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辨析修改病句可从寻找 句中两面词、否定词、关联词 语、并列短语等标志词语人 手,不同标志词语对应不同的 病句类型,如果句中出现并列 短语则要注意如下几种语病: 一、语序不当 1．技术创新的浪潮正使我 们以前所未有的方式存储、获 得和处理有关我们星球的各 种环境和文化现象的信息。 对于信息应是先获得,处 理完成后再存储发布,所以改 为“获得、处理和存储”。
Differentiation and analysis of the modified sentence can be done by looking for words such as two-sided words, negative words, related words, and collateral phrases in the sentence. Different signs correspond to different types of disease sentences. If there are parallel phrases in the sentence, we must pay attention to the following language diseases: 1. Word Order Improper The wave of technological innovation is enabling us to store, obtain and process information about the various environmental and cultural phenomena of our planet in an unprecedented way. The information should be obtained first, and then stored and released after the processing is completed. Therefore, it is changed to “acquisition, processing, and storage”.