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点评凡事不随俗,遇事肯思考,是这篇文章的主题,这其实并不独特而深刻。但将这个主题寓于一个生活的小场景,就显得独树一帜,很有个性了。这篇文章来自生活,真实可感,亲切自然,人物的性格也栩栩如生。对话中的曲折,环境描写的细致,都给文章增色不少。如果其他描写也能如此细致,得分还会更高。(任家斌)春天的小桃园是市民散步的好地方,每天晚饭后,妈妈都要带我去散步。有一天,妈妈晚上加班,奶奶主动说:“走,我陪你去散步。”于是,我们祖孙俩便在朦胧月色中边走边聊。
Comment everything goes without saying anything, thinking is the case of this article is the theme of this article, this is not unique and profound. However, this theme in a small scene of life, it is unique, very personal. This article comes from life, real feel, kind and natural character’s life is lifelike. The twists and turns of the dialogue, the detailed description of the environment, give a lot of articles. If other descriptions can be so meticulous, the score will be even higher. (Ren Jiabin) Spring Peach Garden is a good place for public walks, every day after dinner, my mother took me to take a walk. One day, mom work overtime at night, my grandmother said: “go, I accompany you to go for a walk.” So, our ancestors will walk in the dim moonlight chat.