编者推荐：给『父母之爱』找到载体——搬家——内容有特点。彰显『爱得深沉』的句子是『父母做着小本生意,日子很是艰难』、『妈妈……常常就地取「菜」』和『父亲到外地打工』。此文还需要升格,升格的措施是：删除『后来这老房子要拆迁』,改为『为了改善学习条件』的意思——行文不能泥实。 Editor’s Recommendation: Finding a Carrier for Parental Love - Moving - Content has its own characteristics. The sentences that show “deep love” are “Parents are doing small businesses, and the days are very difficult.” “Mom... often take ”food“ on the spot” and “father went to work in a foreign country.” This article also needs to be upgraded. The measures for promotion are: to remove the “later relocation of this old house” and to change the meaning of “in order to improve the learning conditions”—the text should not be muddy.