同学们所写的动物,很多都是大家很熟悉的。写这些大家很熟悉的动物,要注意的一个问题是,应尽量避免作过多的静态描写。比如写猫呀狗呀鸡呀这些小动物时,你如果详细地描写它五官的形状和位置,就显得多此一举,好像读者都不知道似的。有同学会说,我们写作只 Many of the animals that students write are familiar to everyone. One of the issues to be aware of when writing these familiar animals is that you should avoid making too many static descriptions. For example, when you write a cat, a dog, a chickens, or a chicken, if you describe the shape and position of the facial features in detail, it appears as if you did not know it. Some students will say that we write only