2015年4月中旬,我有幸参加了全国首届“三新”作文教学研讨会,听了向浩老师执教的一堂作文课——《如何写好喻体》,我觉得这是一堂资源丰富、过程有效的作文指导课。笔者认为,在作文指导课上,如果选择了可教的写作点,要达到有效的话,除了常规的营造愉悦气氛、思路清晰、活动充分等要素外,在设计教学时还要努力体现以下几点:选点小巧精致、培养写作思维、用好写作 In mid-April 2015, I was fortunate to have participated in the first “Three New” essay teaching seminar in the country. After listening to a composition class taught by Mr. Hao, “How to Write a Good Metonymy”, I think this is a resource rich , The process of effective writing guidance class. In the author’s opinion, if you choose to be able to write a writing point in the writing guide class, in order to achieve effective, in addition to the routine to create a pleasant atmosphere, clear thinking, full of activities and other elements, but also in the design of teaching efforts should also reflect the following points : Selective small and exquisite, develop writing thinking, good writing