有幸读了徐敬亚先生《先飞起来再读诗》与耿占春先生《青春期写作的几种样式》(《语文学习》2005年第1期),很受教益,开了眼界,学到了思想。但,两位大家都是站在纯文学批评的角度评论这五首诗的,未免有与现今高中语文教学实际相脱节的嫌疑。我谈一点拙见。 I had the privilege of reading Mr. Xu Jingya’s “Flying Up and Reading Poetry” and Mr. Zhan Zhanchun’s “Several Styles of Adolescent Writing” (“Language Study”, 2005, Issue 1). It was very instructive, opened its eyes, and learned ideas. However, both of us are commenting on these five poems from the perspective of pure literary criticism, which is unavoidable and detached from the reality of current Chinese teaching in high schools. I talked a little to see you.