我曾看到这样一段叙事文: 清早起床,先叠被,再扫地,然后罩上电视机,免得使它蒙受灰尘。看起来很有层次,却禁不起仔细推敲。既想使电视机不蒙受灰尘,就该先把它罩上,然后再扫地。现在这样写,岂非本末倒置?可见写文章没有层次不行,有层次而写得不符合实际生活的情理,仍然不行。我个人认为,学习写作不单纯是个语言文字问题,更不是靠一点技巧手法就能提高水平的。一方面固然要观察生活现实(这是直接经验),另一方面还要借鉴前人写 I have seen such a narrative essay: get up early in the morning, stack up first, swept the floor again, and then put the television on so that it will not be dusty. Looks very level, but can not afford to consider carefully. If you want to keep the TV out of the dust, you should cover it first before you swept it. Now that we write this way, is it not the end of the upside-down? It can be seen that there is no hierarchy in the writing of an article, and it is still not possible to write a story that does not conform to the real life. I personally think that learning writing is not a matter of language alone, nor can it be improved by a bit of skill. On the one hand, though, we must observe the reality of life (this is a direct experience), on the other hand, we must also learn from previous writings